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butterfly's fly high
flowers blooming every where
animals runing hear and thary
- by catvonde65 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/14/2009 |
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- Title: spring time
- Artist: catvonde65
- Description: sweet
- Date: 03/14/2009
- Tags: spring time
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- Cottoncandyocbra3 - 03/20/2009
- This was rather terrible. You misspelled "butterflies" and "running" and "there". And "everywhere" works more fluidly as one word. Not even a poem, really. 1/5.
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