YOUR FAULT!

• Artist: BellaXEdward_forever
• Description: This is just a little something I wrote when I was pissed off at my parents... I think we've all been there at some point in time... (It took me about 2 minutes so... sorry if you don't like it).
• Date: 03/21/2009
• Tags: your fault poem hate pain

This pain in my heart,
Throbs through my veins.
YOUR FAULT!

I want to see him,
I can't.
YOUR FAULT!

I feel the need to run,
far far away.
YOUR FAULT!

I never want to come back,
Never.
YOUR FAULT!

I cross my heart,
And hope to die.
YOUR FAULT!

When I said I was sorry,
It was a lie.
'Cause it's
YOUR FAULT I'm broken,
YOUR FAULT I'm pissed,
YOUR FAULT I hate you,
YOUR FAULT I'm missed,
YOUR FAULT I'm crying,
And YOUR FAULT I'm dumb.

I hate this place,
I hate you all,
And it's ALL
YOUR
FAULT!

Comments

[MizukiSakai]

i like it
4/5

[story_liver]

When I said I was sorry, it was a lie seems to be floating. Other than that...I liked it. It spoke to me with it's repetition and simplicity.

[shadwow-wolf]

good basic structure but it could use a little work

[Lizabite]

Very nice. i like the sort of plot to it, but its not very poetic, if you know what i mean?