Dusk

• Artist: Fallen Graceling
• Description: A series of Haikus that I wrote. It was mostly influenced on troubles I've had to go through in life, and of course Riku from Kingdom Hearts.
• Date: 04/04/2009
• Tags: along dusk kingdomhearts riku past

The road is ahead,
I hear it calling my name,
So forward I walk.

Light is behind me,
Leaving it for the last time,
The darkness greets me.

Power fills my heart
It is my new desire,
So I strive for it.

Reborn here and now,
My darkness within darkness,
Lies along the Dusk.

Comments

[pure seyelance]

what doll said, very nice, 10/5

[Douleur Doll]

Its nice. I like how you have a rhythm that doesn't interfere with the message...

[metalhottie415]

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[metalhottie415]

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