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]So Lay Here With Me Tonight...We Wont
Think About Anything..We'll Just Lay Here
Stare Into To Eachother's Eye's And Forget
What's All Around Us....Forget About The PPL
That Dont Care...Just Take Me To Our Place And
Show Me That You Care....Let's Lay Here And Talk
For Hours...Stay With Me... To Our Last Breath
And We'll Share One More Kiss To Our Death....
- by xX_Suicidal_Skittles_Xx |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/06/2009 |
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- Title: Tonight
- Artist: xX_Suicidal_Skittles_Xx
- Description: A Poem I Wrote
- Date: 04/06/2009
- Tags: tonight
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- MiyakoAyame - 04/09/2009
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The biggest thing, I would say, to work on is not writing like you're texting someone... Ex: PPL should be people... Also just giving it a quick glance through so you can avoid typos as best you can. Other than that, great work biggrin
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- CorruptedSadness - 04/06/2009
- Awsome Bree I love It!!!<3
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