Confusion

• Artist: InuYasha4Ever456
• Description: When i wrote this i was very bored. I hope you all like it, and don't just read it but, actually think about what i'm trying 2 say.
• Date: 04/06/2009
• Tags: confusion

Sad and trouble everywhere
want to throw my hands in the air confused
Things are changing, rearranging
What am I to do confused
USA recession, heading to depression
The selfish haven't learned their lesson
What am I to do confused
The earth is melting
Habitats are dissapearing
What am I to do confused
Wars, dying, babies crying cry
STOP IT
STOP IT ALL
Don't give up hope, don't lay down and die
stand up, make a difference, don't be shy
Be your best everyday, change the world in everyway
That's what WE are to do.
by: Soniclover876

Comments

[Xellica22]

I get the message. . . nice job,dude XD

[Mistaken 4 Granted]

Its interesting...a lil hard to understand in parts. but i like it.

[NYlatinothug]

damn..... I LOVE IT!!!!

[lissabean]

I see the message in this poem, but I don't think you should have ended there. Add some of YOUR flare, and then it will be an awesome poem. But good job. ^_^