Vibrations

• Artist: nompchious
• Description: I was listening to a band and I was on the connect:
  
• Date: 04/07/2009
• Tags: vibrations

Vibrations.
Ah! This musical meditation.
Soothing.
Sounds, oozing like waves through drums in unseen places.

Comments

[DDrox316]

no offense, but this confused me. :
personally, i think you should include how like, when music is so loud you can feel it in your body, in your heart
that type of feeling, passion for music
but then again... i don't know what feel you want and what exactly you're writing about.......

[Confizzled_Claustrophobic]

Still, you're a great poet, and I would like to hear more in this poem.

[nompchious]

It's a one stanza poem. short and too the point. It was meant to be short. Easy to remember. It being shorter makes it more memorable I think.

[britbrit27]

i liked it but it was a little 2 short