Fire

• Artist: The_First_God_Zero
• Description: Its a limerick I did for my sisters poetry shop.Check it out
  
  http://www.gaiaonline.com/forum/mini-shops/poetry-of-the-ages-joint-shop-available-spots/t.48866801/
• Date: 05/04/2009
• Tags: fire limerick poetry thefirstgodzero

Always burning bright
Supplying me with light
Fire leaping high and strong
Lasting as ever long
As it is in my sight.

Comments

[Spokane Native 2609]

This is an unusual limerick..aren't they supposed to be of some humor? Just giving you constructive criticism...plz take in wisely.