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I really don't mean to hurt your feelings,
and I don't mean to insult your thoughts,
But from my experience with your dealings,
Pain is all your writing, has for me, wrought.
So take this star upon your fragile brow
and in the acceptance understand how
not only to improve your writing dominion
but understand everything is just my opinion
- Title: 1 star
- Artist: Ryucotsa
- Description: Um, it's just how I feel about 99% of the poetry on this site
- Date: 05/04/2009
- Tags: star
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Comments (2 Comments)
- child_of_the_flame - 05/09/2009
- heheh. That's great. Brilliant. I love it.
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- dragon_freaks_352 - 05/05/2009
- its nice!!
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