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If I wait to watch those cypresses grow,
Will my aspirations grow vague and fade;
Those little, helpless seeds I used to sow,
May not blossom, the petals may cascade.
I used to fear they'd fall too far to find,
The beautiful petals of pink and blue;
That Summer gives way to autumns strong bind,
While my flowers are forgoten by you.
Now, I smile though there is no time to waste,
While sun is in the sky, I'll take my chance;
Planted for you, where my flowers once graced,
There always waiting the petals will dance.
Watch them, my dear, and remember me so,
For, in my memory those seeds do grow.
- Title: Petals
- Artist: whoum
- Description: Sonnet written in shakespearian style first ever try, alot of symbolism though. It's okay I don't expect to turn into Wilfred Owen any time soon ^,^ and you can leave comments although it was implied.
- Date: 05/15/2009
- Tags: petals aspirations death
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Wandering Saio - 07/09/2009
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OH MY GOD.
i absolutely LOVE it!
im faving biggrin - Report As Spam
- tksunshine93 - 05/17/2009
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*gasp*
LOVE IT!!
Extremely beautiful. Personally, my favorite types of poems are Shakespearean sonnets, Japanese haikus and good ol' free verse and hun you did an AMAZING job on this sonnet! - Report As Spam
- whoum - 05/16/2009
- Someone I know told me they didn't understand the first line which is exetremely important to the understanding of the Sonnet. So, cypresses famously grow in graveyards and this line is symbolic of watching time pass with out doing anything to capture the moment...
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