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Why does it feel , when i took the sun
i had gotton some ice,
that wiehed ten thousand tons ?
Does the moon feel like burning rocks ?
Do we know hot or cold ?
Will it freeze up, my only socks ?
Or be covered in terrible mold ?
When we think we felt the heat so great.
Do we rehabilitate ?
Maybe cold could grow the mold ,
And the sun is really cold
In the winter would it be ok ,
to wear bathing suites and run to the bay?
we never know until we try
But what temperature,.. is the sky ?
- Title: Temperature
- Artist: Zenyei
- Description: do we really know ?
- Date: 07/15/2009
- Tags: temperature
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Thorn Of The Sky - 07/18/2009
- Thumper's rule,if you don't have anything nice to say,don't say anything at all.And when the people that criticize someone else on grammar,try having proper grammar yourself.
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- iiMurawr - 07/15/2009
- very good. thats a gtreat question. the poem is a lil chopy but good work! 4/5
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- Midnight Tigers1 - 07/15/2009
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try working on your grammar
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