Light Strokes

• Artist: FilipStiq
• Description: This is really personal, and so I was debating even posting it, but... I think it's fine. Like, 90% of my poetry is stuff you will never read because... you just don't need to, but it's usually my best stuff. Here's one that I think is a little more okay. I'm sure my fiancée won't mind, considering this was actually a really old skool assignment... The rhyme-scheme is absolutely insane, btw.
• Date: 07/26/2009
• Tags: love rain

Land of shadow
in meaning dark
But light strokes across
the page, the grass, her face
Rain’s patter and ding
provoking thought-I.LOVE.YOU.
And the ground we hallow
in a lambent park
Our worry but now dross
as the lines of our souls we trace
Laugh, dance, cry, sing?
I can’t decide, but-iloveyoutoo

Comments

[ninawow_1]

Your poem is so awesome, sentimental, I love it. Keep up the good work.

[FilipStiq]

Aww, this stupid thing got rid of my formatting!! It was all nicely spaced and had cool indents and stuff... LAME. ((<--my fault...))