nightmare

• Artist: SweetToxicPain
• Description: i wrote this when i was angrey with my mom
• Date: 07/27/2009
• Tags: nightmare

i'm tired of this
traped in a nightmare
lost in a nightmare
living a nightmare
Screaming for help
falling in deaf ears
i just find it funny
your drinking and all
heaven for you
my own personal hell
every minute a torture
Brusied hips and bloody lips
protecting you from you
keeping you from falling
hold your waist walking you in
making me scream
i'm tired of this
traped in a nightmare
lost in a nightmare
living a nightmare
asking for help
reaching out
fighting on and on
a losing battel
your hevan my hell
go on open another
drink up
in the end you'll choose
living in an artifical hevan
or making one with me
But ******** it.
I'll remember being traped in this nightmare
Living a nightmare for your hevan
every sip another loss
bruised hips and bloody lips
the cost of holding you close
falling i go to
i feel what you feel
so i'll continue being
traped in this nightmare
lost in this nightmare
living this nightmare
just remember this is your choice

Comments

[chcameeca]

this is good.

[SweetToxicPain]

im disleksic

[maydaymouse]

I agree with XxSaRahLeE72x, it's a very good and expressive poem with some minor mistakes. But I still give a 5/5, and you should tell police about it.

[HeyImSarahLikeWoah]

work on your spelling. Other than that it's great. If that's true tell the police, that's called child abuse.