Beach.

• Artist: d o o o b i e
• Description: For my Other World.
  Written on a my notebook, laying in the sand, listening to the oceans symphony, in my other land.
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• Date: 08/04/2009
• Tags: beach iishbeauteous

The cool breeze runs against my exposed skin,
As I step on to the heated sand,
Swimsuit and sandals is all I’ve brought in,
Into my get away land.



Set my sandals aside,
As I walk to meet the water,
My walk turns into a glide,
When I keep drifting farther.



The shimmering sea I love,
Peace runs up from my feet,
As the bright sun shines above,
For a second,
I didn’t even notice the heat.

Comments

[Mr Toasterhead]

i'm very very proud of you for this ^.^

[Xi L u n a r iX]

totally agreed with Firequtie, brilliant! I really could picture myself there! Amazing submission! well done!

[Mr Lmao]

Brilliant.
will you do my future english homework??
o-o?
<33333

[Suicidal-RagDoll]

i think this was very well written
i could picture myself in walkin across the sand