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Quit lying to get your way
Never i say not this day
But what about her do you not care anymore
How dare you say that of course i do
then stop being so sly
No because then i would be seen
I want to be hidden
Lust isnt the key
Pain isnt either
No but what would you say if i told you you were not hidden
I would say your lying
How did it feel to hear that lie
It felt normal like everything else
So you counter my lies with other lies you are no longer in disquise
So i am still hidden even amoung our lies
Our lies how dare you accuse me of lying
Look at what you said to get your way your no better than i am today
So what i dont care
See your lying again
Leave me alone please
Never i am still hidden and i wont be discovered again!
- Title: Still Hidden
- Artist: slm 07
- Description: this is a poem about two men fighting over a lie
- Date: 08/15/2009
- Tags: still hidden
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Comments (2 Comments)
- sanesanity_xxx - 08/25/2009
- Very interesting, but if you read...your lines started getting lost...aside from that it's fine...a four.
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- Lady ObsidianAngel - 08/20/2009
- not bad just didnt really like the ending of it =/
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