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Chorus
If she dies tonight,
I hope that you know that you’re the blame,
You did absolutely nothing; you watched her fall apart,
If she dies tonight,
I hope you play with fire and lose the game,
If she dies tonight, I know that you’re the blame.
Verse
Hands trembling,
Something’s happening,
Rolling back her sleeve,
She stares down at her wrist.
Her heart’s beating fast,
Her breath’s approaching last,
She clenches her hand tight,
Around the handle of a knife.
Verse 2
Blood on the floor,
Still she’s pouring more,
Rolling up her sleeves,
She stares down at her wrist.
Her hearts beating fast,
Her breath’s approaching last,
She grabs for her wrist,
With a bandage in her hand.
Chorus (slight change)
If she dies tonight,
I hope that you know that you’re the blame,
You did absolutely nothing; you watched her fall apart,
If she dies tonight,
I hope you play with fire and lose the game,
If I die tonight, I know that you’re the blame.
Verse 3
Blood still pouring out,
No one hears me shout,
Rolling down my sleeves,
I give up with this life.
My heart’s beating fast,
Breath’s approaching last
In the remaining time of life,
I write:
Chorus (changed)
If I die tonight,
I hope that you know that you’re the blame,
You did absolutely nothing; you let me fall apart,
If I die tonight,
I hope you play with fire and lose the game,
If I die tonight, I know that you’re the blame.
Bridge
I hope you die in fire,
I hope you choke on your words,
I hope you feel my pain,
I hope you feel it worse.
I hope you suffer,
To the day your soul parts,
Cause if I die tonight,
I know that you’re the blame.
Verse 4
Blood on the floor,
Still she’s pouring more,
Wiping tears on his sleeves,
He stares at her lifeless body.
Heart’s beating fast,
Her breath’s beyond her last,
He clenches her hand tight,
Then hurries out of sight…
Chorus
Verse 5
Hands trembling,
Something’s happening,
He kneels beside my grave,
And mumbles soothing words.
His hearts broke in two,
Tears are fresh and new,
Props a bouquet against the stone,
He’s never felt so alone.
- by ThisIsMyDeathbed_x |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/20/2009 |
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- Title: If she dies tonight
- Artist: ThisIsMyDeathbed_x
- Description: First draft of a SONG I wrote. Yeah, you read it right, a SONG. from ME. :o Anyway, enjoy. do the usual stuff (Read it, comment, rate it, then idolise me and come back for more) :D
- Date: 08/20/2009
- Tags: dies tonight death suicide depression
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Comments (7 Comments)
- ThisIsMyDeathbed_x - 10/27/2009
- biggrin
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- DDrox316 - 10/27/2009
- haha, no problem smile
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- goodcharlotte007 - 10/18/2009
- i love it thnx for the tips on my peoms, i just think about ones that ryhme right now so i'm getting bacj in the groove, so i'll write more my friend
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- ThisIsMyDeathbed_x - 10/17/2009
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Yes, i meant HEARS. Thanks for noticing that xd You're like a little handy proof reader biggrin
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- DDrox316 - 10/17/2009
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ok I'm confused by the 2nd version of the chorus... "if *I* die tonight?" where did that come from because I thought you were talking about *her*?
in verse 3 it should be "No one *hears*"
oh ok i get it now *her* is the person narrating
....its beautiful
i can't write songs, but i can write poems, so good luck with the music smile - Report As Spam
- ThisIsMyDeathbed_x - 08/22/2009
- Thanking you =)
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- Arc En Licorne - 08/20/2009
- this is soo good i LOOOVED it 5/5 plz check out some of my poetry
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