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The thought of you heats my heart
It burns down to the soul
It burns until if feel no more
It really takes a toll
- by Deepfriedoreo13 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/04/2009 |
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- Title: Burning Thought
- Artist: Deepfriedoreo13
- Description: A poem that expressed my thoughts at the moment exactly
- Date: 09/04/2009
- Tags: burning thought
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- iBrightScales - 09/12/2009
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This is just my opinion, but I hate poetry like this. Some one takes a few lines, throws them together, and calls it a poem.
Can four lines really explain a feeling our a thought? I think not.
I will not rate this poem because of my biased opinion. - Report As Spam
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