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In a weak moment, I may consider it
While I immortalize you with these words
And as long as these days are lit
With no compromise from the lords
We can all see the sun search and find
Behind dark brown eyes of reality
Behind the eyes of the lonely mind
That gives us the holy grail to find immortality
Yet, these words mean nothing to you
You and those few words you have to spare
Since there's nothing but a sky that is blue
And a sun that shines on your back that is bare
So we'll wait for these words that will bleed you dry
For as long as we worship the sky
- Title: Sonnet of Immortaility
- Artist: Snasper
- Description: 2008
- Date: 09/05/2009
- Tags: sonnet immortaility
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Comments (3 Comments)
- fruit4you - 09/30/2014
- must* hehe sorry
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- fruit4you - 09/30/2014
- Your sonnet has issues. Not all lines are ten syllables. Each line bust have that to be a sonnet. But its good.
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- batty mobile - 09/06/2009
- Bravo!
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