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Traveling the distance
Of a dew drop from the storm;
Simply winded from emotion
As I cringe inside to mourn.
But knowledge seeps in faster
Empty memories convey;
The life I seek is hiding
A recording I can't play.
Questions cloud my viewpoint
Thinking twice about the past;
My flaws destroy the outcome
But a marking on clean glass.
So lay the world behind me
These insecurities
Erase this gaze which ties me down
This instant, I am free.
- by possum fool |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/07/2009 |
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- Title: Unreal
- Artist: possum fool
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Description:
I hate rhyming poems. But I'm trying one.
I hate the last stanza. Any ideas? - Date: 09/07/2009
- Tags: unreal
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Spyceh - 09/08/2009
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It's pretty gewd :3
I agree with you hating the last stanza.
It seems to just end.
Maybe add another part? - Report As Spam