you finally saw me...

• Artist: wild flower lilly mae
• Description: I... I can't explain it, this is someting greater then this poem could ever explain!
• Date: 10/03/2009
• Tags: finally

Just like you
I have always been here,
through every smile
through every tear...

everyone else
has come and gone,
but you and I
have always been strong...

we never imagined
It would happen this way,
now I can only hope
these feelings are here to stay...

we were only friends
until just recenlty,
when you said
you feel the same way as me...

it's the feeling of being so happy
you could cry,
becaus you know
theres no reason for you to ask why...

I can't fathim it
with only a few words,
so I'll show you in a way
that only I could...

you kiss my neck
so I kiss your lips,
thank you for making it come true
my one and only wish.

Comments

[Faolan14]

Very good poem! smile I really enjoyed it. I would, however, recommend you look it over for spelling errors and capitalization. The word 'fathom' in the second to last stanza was the only major issue, but I did see a few other small things you should be able to catch.

[fearless-kitties]

thats so awsome!