What does it feel like?

• Artist: Irisvane
• Description: This is a poem I wrote, it doesn't rhyme.
  It's just what I felt when he killed me.
  And the feelings that followed...
  One at a time.
  
  Enjoy.
  (You are not alone)
• Date: 10/03/2009
• Tags: does feel like tearing broken

Tearing

A room that I constructed so perfectly, in my mind.
The layout, the color scheme, so beautiful, it would take your breath away.
Then tearing it down.
Ripping away the so carefully applied wallpaper off the walls.
Yanking up the carpet, breaking the pictures, shattering the windows.
A destructive force.
UNSTOPPABLE
It destroys everything in its path.
(And it wont stop)
Not until the last wrecked piece falls.

Until you're left with an empty room.
As ugly and blank as when you started.
It's so unbelievable that...you can't breathe.
And the only thing that comes to mind, the only thing you can think of...
Is as blank as the room you are standing in.

Comments

[Xiraphox]

Beautiful, Irivane! I loved it. :3
It was very touching. You should write poems more often. ^-^

[PoisonOnigiri]

Sad, yet still, the poetry and way with words is beautiful :3

[Nebula Arisen]

Oh wow, this is pretty good, really moving!

[RocketDog14]

That's a pretty good non-rhyming poem.
5/5

[Legion6669]

As I alwasy tell you your creative....All around baby...I love your poetry...good or bad...sad or mad....I know about this and by all means I don't want to kill you or your feelings....I love U baby....I'm sorry that at one point ya felt this way....And I was the cause.