Memory Keepers

• Artist: Moheli
• Description: I was thinking of the liberty bell when I wrote this. x3 I thrive on CONSTRUCTIVE criticism.
• Date: 10/07/2009
• Tags: memory keepers

Memory Keepers
by Moheli A.K. Renae

When you hear the bells ring
That tell of hope and lore
The secrets they are hiding
That keep forever more

Remember to forget
The problems of today
Always try to disperse
The memories that stay

And the bells will keep your memories
With their enthralling chime
Trapping them forever
In the length of their time

But be careful with the secrets
That shiver down your back
When it becomes too much
Bells can always crack

Comments

[elenalovesyou2]

Oooo.. creepy, I like. biggrin
Quite an interesting form of writing, it takes an extra thought process.

[Monjong-wer]

i think it is a really good poem. you should write more! biggrin