what do you do

• Artist: Panda L
• Description:
• Date: 12/05/2009
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what do you im here with out you
my feet are cold becuse i have no shoes
i wanted to come with you
but all you would do
is turn right around and nuu

so what do you do
thought you said i love you
but its was all just a lie
and now im feeling so blind
now its back to my suprize
will lead to my dimise
you said that you would
you said that you could

so what about now
why you say hey
now im gonna sit here another lonlely day
all im gonna say
is i thought that you said that you would take me away
these are my final days
all i can think about you
how you made me feel full
how you made a null
now i just feeling treaing the eyeballs out of my skull
so now that you here
all i can say
plaese leave me alone and go away

Comments

[DawnLii]

This is good but it has typos and the grammer is below average. How I know about the grammer being below average? Im an english teacher.

[starryluminara]

that's a good poem, although you had a few type-o's I really like it.