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As i see the war today i see bodies rotting in decay bodies everywear blood scatered on the walls unknowing if im next who! what! when! smoke surronds my eyes to tell me you cant trust anyone but yourself!!!!!!!!!!!!!! twisted
when i look in the a mirror i see myself crying tears of blood noone is there to help me heal my wounds from battle my body in pain ppl who said they would be there for ever for me have betrayed me and made my whole perspective of live change.
- by -kakashiandyaoi- |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/25/2009 |
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- Title: freind or enemy
- Artist: -kakashiandyaoi-
- Description: Who can u trust when ur in danger...?
- Date: 12/25/2009
- Tags: freindorenemy
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Morgan Charlene - 05/07/2010
- write more poems they are soo good please please please write more because its so good and very deep nice details
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- KoriinNiikokiiro - 04/13/2010
- this is very intense! like wickedly hardcore!
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- Adrian Sage - 01/17/2010
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Clean, short, simple, but somehow it's moving up my mind.
I wish it would be a little longer ... so you could have made your point even clearer and easier to follow.
3/5 ^^ - Report As Spam
- InsomniacNightlight - 01/15/2010
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thats really cool sparky i give you 4/5
*claps happily* -^o^- - Report As Spam
- Rayne Light - 01/04/2010
- I thnik it needs to be cleand up some and that it could us more detaile.3/5
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- BloodStainLoveStory - 12/29/2009
- interesting.., could be longer though and more explanatory, good work nonetheless. 4/5 for effort
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