Chains Of Darkness

• Artist: Xx-Morbid China Doll
• Description: Comment and rate please?
• Date: 01/01/2010
• Tags: chains darkness

Slaves to the darkness
Bound by these chains
The evil that holds you
You do as it bids

Cut, cut away
The darkness around you
Your blood will free you
From the chains that surround you

Blood dripping down
Like wax of a candle
Burns through these chains
But you've lost the handle

You can't hold this blade
Away from your skin
As the chains fall away
Your heart just gives in.

Comments

[1X LA DE DA X1]

a good poem, but u need to make the first two stanzas rhyme if ur making it a rhyming poem~

[White Rabbit Mara]

very good, you write with your heart, i feel your pain.