Awaiting Love

• Artist: Zimmimaru
• Description: this is a poem i wrote while waiting for my gf to come over one late night
• Date: 01/04/2010
• Tags: awaiting love

I stay up all night hoping and waiting,
but now my hope is casualy fading.
To some this would seem crazy posibly insane,
I call it love they are somewhat the same.
As i start to fade from conciousness,
I start to wonder if this is all nonsense.
I wont give up i surley wont quit,
so here i continue to patiently sit.
I will wait forever if humanly possible
this foe called sleep is quite formidable.

Comments

[Zimmimaru]

thx ^w^

[iiMTVii]

you need to work on your punctuations, spellings, and caps.

posibly is possibly, casualy -casually, other then those errors, i liked your poem, and i liked how you wrote it. your very expressive. but i do think you need to look over your poem, and fix some sentences... other then that, your good smile .... just need to work on it.