Dear Self,

• Artist: Dark Yet Pure
• Description: those questions you get before that big life changing experience
• Date: 01/14/2010
• Tags: dear self

Dear Self,
Have i been smiling
without thinking?
I'm scared and unprepared
of this raw world
that is being hurled
straight into my heart
which is ripping apart
has it been a childish dream?
the thought makes me want to scream
Inside is no one home?
inside my heart is fragile, not made of stone
Please someone save me
I am blind, i cannot see
i don't know my own self
all my dreams packed on a dusty self
no more riddles
no more rhymes
i just want to cry

Comments

[XxMissBellaxX]

Amazing,

[Lord Vassago]

Good Morning,
A fellow poet here, I rather enjoyed your poem, although i found the line "I'm scared and unprepared" seem out of place from the rhyming scheme. other than that it flowed nicely for a majority of the poem, in the end i gave you a 4.5/5 but gaia rounds automaticly =) i'll check out other things you have and if it's not to much to ask, could you check my stuff out too? Happy writing.