-
Blood running down the door
Blood spilling on the floor
Let it come from the sky
Let the angels cry from up high
Blood on my hands
And in the garbage cans
spilling from her mouth
Running towards the south
Hunger for it day and night
Trying to hide from human sight
They run and try to hide
But I creep up from behind
Blood running down the door
Blood spilling on the floor
Blood on my hands
- by Samuelhellen |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/20/2010 |
- Skip
- Title: Blood!!!
- Artist: Samuelhellen
- Description: this is for all the night crawlers
- Date: 02/20/2010
- Tags: blood
- Report Post
Comments (3 Comments)
- Silencematters - 02/21/2010
-
I love it. There are a lot of things I could fit this with. I love your use of words and I think my favorite part of the hole thing is when it said Blood on my hands
And in the garbage cans
spilling from her mouth
Running towards the south"
it was really great. Good job. hint of advise though is it flowed great until the last part where you said "and in the garbage cans" that kind of threw it off for me it would sound better if you left that part off. Otherwise wonderful - Report As Spam
- Lil_Rykku - 02/20/2010
- yesh i like it alot ^_^
- Report As Spam
- Samuelhellen - 02/20/2010
- tell me if you like it or not
- Report As Spam
- |
- |
-
Submit
