The Great Pretender

• Artist: eskey
• Description: Okay first off
  Yush, i reallyz do feel that way
  No i did not copy and paste this crappy writing of anyone else but mine
  Ummm and yeah
  Feel free to comment (:
  Mhmmm
• Date: 03/07/2010
• Tags: great

By the deepest contempt within thous sorrowful eyes
Foretells our ever diminishing eternal love
Faith, and Love thou have longed for within me
Had never persisted
For that twas Lust, and nothing more
Tis now your utter belief in this now present day
Oh, how thous heart aches in dismay

Twas I who truly bleed
Such as the man whom died 1000 times inside
For what he had so legitimately dearly loved
Was as much suffer as I had within the mental unconscious state of Mind
May I have been stupor towards such
Of all thou twas most obvious to the happenings of my enduring suffer

But then again Tis now your utter belief in present day
For that twas Lust, and nothing more

Comments

[Anime look alike707]

Quite amazing...oww my head hurts! 5/5!

[Purple_Pearl_Girl]

This poem is really good. no one uses the words that sheakspear and edger allen poe use in there best poetry anymore. I think this poem is wonderful. I'm not saying that just because iether. I do think this poem is really good.