Sugar Suicide

• Artist: SilvertongueSagittarius
• Description: it was like...a 5min poem. One of the worst Ive ever written. and I bet it gets the highest rating of all my work... Please, go check out my other poetry and lyrics. They're WAY better than this crappy four-stanza poem. Im normally a spoken word poet and a metal vocalist and rapper
• Date: 03/11/2010
• Tags: sugar suicide

To those of you I love, Goodnight
To those of you I hate, Goodbye
You're always wrong, I'm always right
You'll never be as great as I

Your eyes are bitter, mouth so sour
You exist to haunt my dreams for now
my retaliation gives you power
It's time, I must escape somehow

fading, forgetting reason
Changing, it's getting worse
Mating, and never leaving
Hating, who goes first?

Sincerely, no one gives a damn
no more suicide by suger
To love the lion, you hate the lamb
To spread the word, you rape the land

Comments

[Rkah]

Its not so bad. I just didn't like the way everything was like worded, but other than that it wasn't terrible. I'll check out your other stuff though. 3/5