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THE PROPHECY OF FOUR
TO BE TOGETHER IS OUR FATE,
BECAUSE WE ARE THE WHOLE,
AND EVEN WHEN WE ARE SEPARATE,
WE STILL YET PLAY A ROLE.
THE FIRST IS EARTH WITH AL IS MIGHT,
WITH POWER STRONG AND BOLD,
IT CUPS ALL LIVING THINGS IN SIGHT,
WITH IN ITS GENTLE HOLD.
AND SECOND IS AIR’S GENTLE BREATH,
WHO SUSTAINS EVERY MAN,
WITH OUT HER SWEET TENDER CARESS,
DEATH’S GRIP WOULD RULE THIS LAND.
NEXT IS WATER’S LIQUID KISS,
IN HEALING SHE IS VERSE,
HER BEING BRINGS MAN UTTER BLISS,
FOR HER THOU EVER THIRST.
LASTLY IS FIRE’S UNTAMED RAGE,
FROM WHICH WE DRAW OUR HEAT,
HE HOLDS DESTRUCTION IN HIS CAGE,
TO BURN ALL AT HIS FEET.
BINDED TOGETHER THOUGH BORNE APART,
THIS IS OUR DESTINY,
THE POWER AT THE CORE OF HEART,
SHALL LAST AN ETERNITY.
- by Kiirvasser |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/08/2010 |
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- Title: T P O F
- Artist: Kiirvasser
- Description: ITS ABOUT MY FOUR MYSTERY FRIENDS....THE ELEMENTS.......THEY ALWAYS SEEM TO BUFFLE YOU.................ITS NOT THE BEST POEM BUT....TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK
- Date: 04/08/2010
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- l_Shamrock_l - 04/09/2010
- Be sure to check your beats per line. It's easy to lose the rhythm with too many words in a single line and thus lose your rhyme-scheme. Also, some words just don't rhyme. It looks like you were going for the rhyme, it's just that they don't... It's a pretty good poem though. It makes me want to shout "Captain Planet!" XP
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