10 Haikus

• Artist: SilvertongueSagittarius
• Description: I've been doing a lot of Haikus for NaPoWriMo. For those who dont know, a Haiku is a poem with 17 syllabls or less.
• Date: 04/12/2010
• Tags: haikus

Women's baseball game
I hold up a sign, saying
"Go! Gen 3:16"

If you cant take jokes
Than Im glad you're offended
Im only kidding

College kids are strange
A lot like the high school kids
Only stupider

There is no great man
without the two great women
that will carry him

If I had money
I would rub it on my face
and make myself green

Appreciate this
for the beauty that it is
avoid the foma

I only love you
because you arent worth hate
at least you're not...yet

Procrastination
will continue to kill me
but it feels so good

No one cares for lies
that dont offer salvation
what an exeption

Plagued, I stumble on
into a world of discourse
that meets me with lead

Comments

[SilvertongueSagittarius]

I prefer joke haikus. Serious hakus sound wierd to me. Not enough syllables to make a good point

[Echo Ligeia]

Hmm. They're ok: I feel like most of them are "joke" haikus with punchlines instead of themes. I liked the last two, though - very powerful. They seem to show that you get better the more you write, eh? ^.^

[SilvertongueSagittarius]

it is indeed, sir! Kudos on appreciating good literature!

...My name is Yon Yonsin

[fightoffyourdemons101]

haha very well written. is your reference to "foma" from Kurt Vonnegut? if it is that's sweet.

[-o-Sakura-x-]

I like this cool