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Following you- a SasuNaru poem
Where are you, my loved one?
Where do you reside;
In the heart of another?
In the depths of your pride?
Are you content
To dwell in your hate.
To hide in the darkness;
Watch the light dissipate?
No, You are lost
In the realm of your mind;
Gone with the wind
And the passage of time.
What are you, my loved one?
What have you become;
An avenger of wrongs,
To the depths you succumb.
Will you truly allow
This curse to unfold
Envelope your soul
And to break bonds of old?
What of your past.
And those you forgot?
We made who you were
And That Boy you are not.
Who are you, my loved one?
Who stole you from me?
What manner of hatred
Could not let you see?
The shadow of guilt
Still cuts through my soul
Do you feel it too?
Does your heart feel un-whole?
Why must you hurt them
My pride, soul and heart?
Accept my offer, loved one.
I can't stand to be apart.
Stay with me, my loved one.
Or let me come along.
I do not care of trifles such
As what is right or wrong.
For years I've waited for this day.
I've watched you from afar.
Never knowing if I could
Continue with this war.
The war within my soul, my love
The war around us now.
Bloodshed, fire, and Death of Friends
And I must ask you how.
How could you ask me, my loved one?
to accept you no longer need
the brush of my fingers upon your cheeks
and my replacement is hate and greed.
You say you can kill me with no regrets
But I can see the lie
And yet if you left me here and now
I have not doubt I would die.
For without you I am nothing
And I know it's the same for you.
That's why you wish to kill me
Only then will the lies become true.
Please stay with me, my loved one!
Don't leave me in this place!
Or let me join in your travesties
For you I would fall from grace.
Give me peace I beg you now
Show me what I once knew
Still lives behind your deceptive mask
I dare you to prove that untrue.
…
You turn around to leave me here?
…
You won't reap what you have sown?!
…
"……You coming with me, Dobe?
…I...I don't want to leave alone…"
- by Sang Noir de la Vigne |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/26/2010 |
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- Title: Following you
- Artist: Sang Noir de la Vigne
- Description: This is a sasunaru poem i did last night during one of those incredibly emo moments where you pine for your loved one who lives far away. but it turned out to be happy in the end and...gah just read it i guess.
- Date: 04/26/2010
- Tags: following sasunaru sasuke naruto yaoi
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Jeyrin - 05/07/2010
- I really, honestly, love it. And I'm not just saying that. It's beautiful. *favorites* 5/5, 100%. I'd like you to look at some of my poems, too, if you have the time. I'd like to hear your opinion.
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- Zombie_Nose - 04/29/2010
- Very beautiful. I love how it looks like an ordinary love poem in the beginning then out of no where it becomes completely different. love it!
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