Edge of a Knife

• Artist: DreamHalo
• Description: Y'know, most people who read this are probably going to think 'suicide' but I was actually picturing murder as I wrote this.
• Date: 05/07/2010
• Tags: edge knife

I stood on the cusp of
Death or life
My fate was decided by
The edge of a knife
Now, in a pool of crimson
I lie
And lovely rose petals
I cry
I wait for the deep, deep sleep
To take me away
For in this world
I can no longer stay

Comments

[infinitexcode]

The piece is well thought out. Most people, myself included, would naturally assume suicide. But, nonetheless it is an awesome piece. (for kedamono: I think the rose petals were used to imply the realization of the persons crime, and the unreadiness of it. Whether that last it is the crime itself or the guilt, I cannot say.) Anyways, excellent job!

[DreamHalo]

'And lovely rose petals I cry' it's not actually rose petals, the persons s'posed to be cryin blood. I probably could have written that part a little better.

[kedamono777]

very nice biggrin
true i was thinking suicide D: lol.
for the part "and lovely rose petals" i did not understand how that tied in with the rest?

[ativat]

well written.