Disapear

• Artist: All Halo No Wings
• Description: not loved, not cared for, not exsisting
• Date: 05/09/2010
• Tags: disapear

A shadow in the dirt
no figure in the air
Found no trace only a hair

No one sees me
Do they care
I am so lost I need a flare

Gone to sleep
Woke up tomorrow
Can't see my hands
I'am in sorrow

See no eyes
See no face
I found my resting place

Im a ghost
They wished me away
Im treated just clay

My pain is mine i do not share
It fells like hot coals thoughs stones I bear

At night i cry thoughs bitter tears
this is the only way to erase my fears

No more ignorence it is done
i will stay away from the gun

All i need is a lover
Just to complete my cover

Comments

[OwO-Devils_Hound-OwO]

"Im a ghost
They wished me away
Im treated just clay"
If you don't mind me saying I think 'Im treated just *as* clay' Might be better. Other than that bit 5/5, Great job.

[ezzy111]

i like the poem. very heart touching! she will come eventually! 5/5 ::3:

[King of Trash]

hang in there... i'm sure she will come. eventually. 5/5