sitting back and wachtin

• Artist: pantech123
• Description: three is a crowd
• Date: 05/10/2010
• Tags: freinds

In the background not saying a word
wachting and listing as the tears flow
she just a follower not a leader
she walks behind them not saying a word

days go by she still silent like a mouse
her heart akes in the pain
she want to scream to get it out
behind close doors she lets the anger out

she can only talk when the other not around
she is no longer silent like a mouse
she thinks and she cries she cant take the pain

she tells how she feels but all the do is laugh
they think she only quiet good little girl
behind close doors the tears flow once agian.

Comments

[the orangey best]

good poem but you wrote 'hear' instead of her and you missed 'is' in the sentince: she no longer silent like a mouse.
otherwise, very discriptive poem.