the game of life

• Artist: sweet_midnight_flower
• Description:
• Date: 05/17/2010
• Tags: game life

I am scared and alone,
In this world unknown,
My heart is gone,
As if it was a pawn,
In this game of life there are no winners or losers,
Only broken hearts and posers

Comments

[morghin]

i like it! and it gives a pretty good description of the way the world is today. 4

[lemmylime]

I gave it a 3 simply because it's good, but I've always felt rhyme gave poems a level of childishness/playfulness that this one doesn't need.