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• Artist: I screwed Princess Peach
• Description: Made it short becauze I was running out of rhymes. And not,i'm not trying free verse. Just, my friend is a lady's man and he keeps talking about kissing his new gf,that kinda crap. well,this is what i thought i would feel like if i was in that situation. i know,it's horrible. i just don't want to delete any of my entries. enjoy. i might think up a better version of this.
• Date: 06/29/2010
• Tags: first

What am I supposed to do?
The flare in your eyes
This feeling's never came before
No words I could use to describe
I try to say the words
But, my thoughts become senseless
You came and changed my life
Made my heart strong,yet defenseless
My god, what is with me?
These thoughts are new
They are are full of visions
Of what you could do
Altho it seems weird
I actually like these thoughts
It just goes to show
That I love you...a whole lot.

Comments

[I screwed Princess Peach]

wow. I'm actually getting good comments from this? Thanks. I just never thought this was THAT good. But,thank you for the compliments.

[The_ Beautiful_ Star_XD]

i love it it rocks this planet keep on writing

[u_knw_who]

i really love ur poem keep up the good work smile