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Part A1
You're my inspiration, you made it easier to go on,
Now you are my fear, It is hard to let you go,
I love darkness he wants me,
He understands my lonliness.
He knows exactely how it feels to be deserted and alone.
Part A2
I'd do anything for you, but you left me all in fear,
I'm freezing, my heart is turning cold,
No more can I call you my dear.
Will I ever face you again?
I'm tired of this charade.
Locked inside my own locker.
I know these words don't make sense for you.
But they do for me, and all the other millions of people out there.
Part C1
I've loved you, with my whole heart,
You hurted, with your whole love,
You killed me, Now there's only darkness left,
When the fire is here, My eyes are all red,
They burn with the sinner's desire.
Part A2
Oblivion is dragging me down,
Demons faces, there are so many of them,
Looking back, Even if i'm not allowed to,
Seeing these horrors I'm not used to seeing with you,
You only gave me pain and suffering and hurt,
But I still cherish some memories, clinging onto them,
Trying to hold you, even if I don't want,
Save me now, no more.
Part C1
I've loved you, with my whole heart,
You hurted, with your whole love,
You killed me, Now there's only darkness left,
When the fire is here, My eyes are all red,
They burn with the sinner's desire.
Part B1
You know the feeling, you've been there too.
So sing along, you know how it is, to be abused.
Maybe not hurted with punches and scars,
They're all mental, we ******** up so bad,
forgot who we are.
Part C1
I've loved you, with my whole heart,
You hurted, with your whole love,
You killed me, Now there's only darkness left,
When the fire is here, My eyes are all red,
They burn with the sinner's desire.
- Title: The sinner's desire
- Artist: Ahseyo
- Description: COMMENT, COMMENT, COMMENT PEEOPLE!!!
- Date: 07/29/2010
- Tags: sinners desire
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Comments (6 Comments)
- esmeraldaIV - 08/01/2010
- this is extraordinary, i love the characteristics u put into it. u could actually imagine urself n the background=D...u should check out my writting and poems n my profile
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- GHF Prodigy - 07/31/2010
- wow itz great. While I was reading this, I found myself engulfed by emotions, remembering my own pain through your words. For that to happen, I'd have to be very moved. Keep up the good work and never change
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- flluffyness22 - 07/30/2010
- rlly gud!!!! keep up da gud work!!! im a writing nerd lol!!! (visit my profile plz i worked hard on it and i need frends)
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- Hotaru no tatakai - 07/29/2010
- I like the tome that was set for this, it was very....deep. It has a story behind it I'm sure, I can tell the pain. I can almost feel it.
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- Echo_Shora - 07/29/2010
- Interesting. A little too demonic for my taste, but you definatly feel the sadness and pain, so I'll give it a 4 (The only reason I'm not giving it a 5 is because of demonic overtones, don't worry I'd do the same to christian overtones too) lol
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- xXScarlet ShadowXx - 07/29/2010
- wow. this is pretty good (: wayyy better than mine xD haha ... but if i can make a suggestion, i would say that you change the word loneliness in the third line to another word, since you already have "alone" in the line after that. i dont know, just thought it might sound better. razz but its really good ^-^
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