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What is it I see?
Everywhere in the hallways
I see people looking at me
with an angry face
Not knowing what I did wrong
Nobody talks to me
I feel like murdering myself
Til one day someone comes over to me
Her name was Anna
She turned out to be my best friend
And I never want to leave her side
- by Clare13tube |
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- | Submitted on 11/10/2010 |
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- Title: Having a chance
- Artist: Clare13tube
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Description:
This is my 2nd poem.
I remembered this problem from 7th grade and I hated seeing peoples faces
looking at me. sometimes I still feel like killing myself,but when Im with my best friend Anna, I feel important and don't care what others thinks of us. - Date: 11/10/2010
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Comments (5 Comments)
- azaycer - 10/12/2013
- Awkward high school experience summed up, and it is very relatable. One or two fumbles with spelling but not bad over all, 3/5
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- Clare13tube - 04/26/2011
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Thx!
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- fluffy condoms - 04/25/2011
- i luv that poem, even though its never happened to me, i have seen it happen to other ppl. good job!
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- Clare13tube - 11/11/2010
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Thx! I didn't even noticed that my spelling was wrong.
So I just corrected it. Thx again! - Report As Spam
- Doctor Clarice - 11/10/2010
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I enjoy the point of the poem.
But next time pay a little more attention to the spelling.(: - Report As Spam