Never Again

• Artist: Captain_Meme202
• Description: This is a true life expreience and it was going to be a song but i couldn't think of anything else to write about but if anyone wants to write a song with me that would be great!!! I'm new at this whole poetry lyrics thing.
• Date: 02/07/2011
• Tags: never again

You never feel what they felt till there gone
you never want the samethings till its wrong
you never see pain till you brake a heart
once filled with love....
now a beautiful mess

Comments

[Shibu Mizaku]

I could try and give you some pointers, but I don't know your story so I can't really tell you how to make it better beyond checking the spelling (break a heart, not brake) not a bad start though.