Not yet titled

• Artist: LostinKhaos
• Description: It's a work in progress.
  Can yhu think up titles for this song? :) It would help.
• Date: 05/06/2011
• Tags: titled

(Verse1)
My lips are moving
Buy can you hear what I gotta say?
I'm loosing
This battle, you've won a dead parade
I surrender
Got my hands up as I shout
"Hold your fire!"
Just hear me out
(Chorus)
I'm sorry
Don't know how else to apologize
Had you caught in my web
Full of lies
I'm burried in my own regrets
Trying so hard
to fix the mess I put you through
But the stain's growing too
(Verse2)
I'm sinking in a bottomless pit
Of despair and
I swear
I would reverse
Rewind
Reset
The time just to start over again

(Chorus)

I'm awake and now I see
The pain I caused
Can you forgve me?
I comprehend my mistake
Deficiency's in my vein

(Chorus)

Comments

[Shadow(AoD)]

This is an interesting piece of art. Spoken Flames of Regret? Maybe that would be a good name. How ever, it is ultimately up to you. Very well done. You should definitely finish this up. I think it would be a great song.

[kairi13492]

hold your fire is a good name

[kairi13492]

5/5 um can I use a peace of this in my new song im writing called fire and rain the part i want is this .....Got my hands up as I shout
"Hold your fire!"
Just hear me out... plz mesage me yes or no