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journal thing.. ._.
umm i'm probably gonna put pictures i take of stuff and add 'em here. and i'm gonna add my drawings on here also. i might write about things that happen in real life also i guess o.o' oh! and and my poems! i will put 'em on here also! =D
A Painful Lie (another poem i wrote)
A painful lie
By, Rebekah J.

You said you loved me
You said you cared
You said that you'd always be there.

One day, you weren't acting the same,
That day, I thought I was to blame.
I asked you if you were okay,
You told me to go away.
I wanted to know why you were acting so strange.
I wondered if I made you change.
Then you told me...
Told me right then and there.
You told me that you didn't care.
You said that for you I was wrong,
That you never loved me all along.
I was shocked at what I had heard..
So shocked inside- my vision blurred.

Why did you live out this lie?
My emotions made me cry.
My love was real and true..
But wasted...on the likes of you.

I left upset and walked away,
Hoping you'd ask me to stay.
You didn't care 'bout how I'd feel..
You acted like it was no big deal.
I journeyed home with a broken heart.
With a lie that tore my life apart.
Preparing to erase my memory of you..
And pray for a love that will be true.






User Comments: [5]
Kyjack
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Fri Aug 17, 2007 @ 07:03pm


that wasnt boring i really enjoyed it. your a very good poet if thats urs smile


Nick the fallen one
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Wed Aug 22, 2007 @ 03:06pm


awesome peom


djtony21
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Thu Aug 23, 2007 @ 09:57pm


thanks for the comments ^ ^


rainydaze123
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Tue Nov 13, 2007 @ 02:53am


love poem once again!!! do you ever write poems about anything else why don't you write a poem about turkeys or something!?


djtony21
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Wed Dec 19, 2007 @ 05:52pm


*glares at sakura* i'm not doing a poem about turkeys!! =.=


User Comments: [5]
 
 
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