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wtf is this?
up and down ur all around say goodnite and goodbye
ok so i wanted to keep u all hangin there cuz that was reeeeeeeeeealy fun!!! but now i just wanna post some more real bad so here i am, giving up on keepin u hangin and posting some more...so yeah now u get to see wut happens...or wut doesn't happen...oooooooooo!!! and now here we have lucky number 13

#13
The truck rammed into Harrold’s side, flinging him out of the way as it continued to slide until it crashed into the already totaled cars. Harrold tumbled down the road like a rag doll, finally skidding to a stop on his back.
“Harrold!” Carina started running towards him as the confused pickup truck driver got out of his truck to inspect the damage.
When Carina had reached him Harrold was trying to get up, without success. His left arm was covered in blood along with the left side of his face. His right arm clutched his side.
“Um, Harrold I don’t think getting up would be a good idea right now.” Carina said after she saw Harrold’s not so good condition.
“No.” Harrold protested. “I gotta see if the driver’s ok.” He quickly looked to Carina, a shocked expression on his face. “Are you ok?!”
“Yes, I’m totally fine, but you need to stay put!” Carina seemed frustrated that Harrold didn’t care at all for his own safety.
Harrold finally made it to his feet. He staggered back to the scene. The pickup truck driver and the driver of the other car gaped at him.
“Somebody call 911!” The pickup truck driver yelled as Harrold approached the accident.
“No, I’m fine. Nothing—a few bandages—won’t fix.” Harrold struggled to form the words. He was breathing in short rasps. When he tried to take another step, he toppled forward. As soon as he hit the ground, Carina was at his side.
“Harrold stop it! Why do you never do as I ask?!” She looked close to crying. Harrold tried to lift himself up again.
“One of you help me!” Carina begged the other two drivers for assistance. The pickup truck driver came over and put a hand on Harrold’s shoulder, trying to convince him to stay on the ground. The other driver fumbled with his cell phone, trying to dial the correct numbers.
“An ambulance is on its way!” The driver finally announced as he flipped his phone shut.
Harrold had somehow made it up again. “Does anybody need…? My…house…”
“Harrold, I think that being unable to make sentences proves that you need to stop moving!” Carina yelled. She was running after him franticly as he stumbled aimlessly toward the wreck.
Harrold’s vision started to blur. His body was trembling. At that moment, he felt completely and utterly helpless. He felt his weak body start fall to the ground, but couldn’t stop it. Carina caught him. She held him tightly. Harrold’s eyes closed slowly and he fell into unconsciousness.


im not sure if i really like this page all that much....it seems kinda...idk. just tell me if u like it. i may end up making some sort of change but prolly not. so now u no wut happens weeeeee and harrold is not dead......yet
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one more thing, i REALLY need to know if this story is actually keeping ur interest at all so PLEASE TELL ME!!! if u dont i will be sad....and there will be no vampires in this story if anybody else was wondering...






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SuperSingingSox
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commentCommented on: Thu Sep 20, 2007 @ 10:58pm
I luff this story. Too much, in fact. It's like.. a drug. but legal, and not bad for your health. well, maybe not for harrold's health. but for ours, it is. heart heart


commentCommented on: Sat Sep 22, 2007 @ 04:35am
luv teh story.
best ever.
yay no vamps.
woooot! XD


WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN WIFF HARRRRRRRRRRRRRRROLD?!!?!

O_O



cute_roxas
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chibi-yami-oniguri
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commentCommented on: Sun Sep 23, 2007 @ 04:57am
hmmm...... wow.... harold.... i mean gosh..... he's not dead yet! lol. I can't wait to read the rest so HURRY THE FRICK UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOW!!! *cracks whip* lol. jk. take your time.... but seriouslu don't take too long or i'll kill you..... or steal the story..... or just ask you what happens..... but you won't let me do any of those RIGHT?!! i am in a weird mood so don't take any of this comment seriously except the part that says this story is awesome! i love you.


commentCommented on: Mon Sep 24, 2007 @ 10:14pm
woah. i just realized i was on roxas when i commented.

that WAS me XD



yuki_momo_kisa77
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