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this is a poem that i wrote for class...

its a french form of poetry called a rondou

the poem's topic was "something you feel passionite about", but u couldnt use love

hypnotic beat

As I'm listening to the flow
I can feel it within my soul
lyrically the music attacks
Revealing to you what you lack
My real self i don't really know
Might find myself yelling fo sho

Nah thats not really who i am
No matter what you list to
Musics just music in the end

Wow wow or just blim blam
Don't let music be just a scam
Letting it change you, no be you
Or in rap terms do how you do
After this i bet you'll be like damn
musics just music in the end

-miroku_kun-8701
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**when i put wow wow it was onamonapia for a guitar playing and blim blam was supposed to be a hpihop beat**

the rhyme scheme of the rondou is

a
a
b
b
a
a

a
b
R

a
a
b
b
a
R
-The lower case a's and b's mean those lines rhyme
-The upper case R's are the refrain lines which mean they are repeated
-Rondou's are in iambic tetrameter which means all the lines must have
8 syllables