For checking. o_o;;. I am not a poet...but I mean, some basics are obvious.
So, recently, I got this one:
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Thoughts were slowly drifting through my mind,
like thin clouds hanging from the sky.
Dreams were humming like dragonflies,
Swimming in smoky paradise.
Love is leaving me behind,
Once fragile and oh so kind
Still sleeping in my wonder-why
Quietly sighing a lullaby
Shards of mirror in my eye
Once again as the tears go by
Phoenix bird will rise and fly
Rebirth when my tears run dry
But for now I’ll have to must cry
Sedate my body as well as my mind
Hum me to sleep lovely dragonfly
I promise tomorrow I will abide.
like thin clouds hanging from the sky.
Dreams were humming like dragonflies,
Swimming in smoky paradise.
Love is leaving me behind,
Once fragile and oh so kind
Still sleeping in my wonder-why
Quietly sighing a lullaby
Shards of mirror in my eye
Once again as the tears go by
Phoenix bird will rise and fly
Rebirth when my tears run dry
But for now I’ll have to must cry
Sedate my body as well as my mind
Hum me to sleep lovely dragonfly
I promise tomorrow I will abide.
Yes, emo all over the place. Also, wtf dragonfly?
The edit from my part:
Jorre
Slowly drifting through my mind,
Thin clouds hanging from the sky.
Dreams humming like dragonflies,
Swimming in a smoky paradise.
Love leaving me behind,
Still sleeping in my wonder-why
Once again fragile, so kind
Quietly sighing a lullaby
Shards of mirror
as the tears go by
to rise and fly
Rebirth, to run dry
So now cry
Sedate my mind
Hum me to sleep
I will abide.
Poetry...it involves deleting redundancy biggrin
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A boob-blimp lifts me to the sky
Dreams lifting me through the thighs
Towards a damp paradise
Love leaving me behind,
still sleeping in my wonder-what
Once again I go to grind
Roughly up the maidens arse
Shards of cabn
as the sweat goes by
I let out a sigh
Rebirth, to run dry
So now cry
Sedate my wheenie
whine me to sleep
Lullabye made of weeps
A crappy edited version.