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Lunar Curse----------(preview chapters for now. finished version in the works)
This is going to be used as my fiction i am curently writing. later it will include more than just the preview versions of the first four chapters but for now that is all i have to offer. Enjoy this preveiw of my fiction Luna
Lunar Curse-Chapter 2-Spirit of the Forest(preveiw chp.)

After many days of walking, I find myself standing on the edge
of a large clearing. In the midle of this vast clearing stands the Tree
of the Ancients.This tree is said to hold the power of the Ancients and
house the forest spirit Shasta, Lady of the Trees. The front of the tree
has but one door, by which one can enter the tree. Carved on the door
is a message that reads:
Many may enter, But few will leave. If you have come to see
the forest spirit, you must overcome my trial. What you bring
in with you, could be a blessing or a curse. My trial is a trial
of reflection; you must overcome your past. This is the nature
of my trial, enter only if you are sure of your past.

- The Forest Spirit Shasta


The door opens as I read the last words. A strange scent of wildflowers
come from the doorway, and flower petals blow out across the ground.
Stepping through the door, I find myself in a small world. Around me I see
hills in every direction. They continueout across the horizon, beyound them
are mountains that stretch out as far as the eye can see.
"Hello."
Turning around, I see what apears to be a teenage girl. She is skinny,
tall, has long green hair, eyes that are a green as leaves of an evergreen,
and skin that is white with a pale green hue. She is wearing a dress and cloak
that seem to be made of dark green leaves. Her appearance does not decieve
me, for I know that she is the Ancient spirit Shasta.
"Why are you here Raziel?" she asked. "Where you not banished to the
Abyss?"
"I was, but i found a way to get out of the Abyss." With a growl I continue,
"I have come here to ask you for your power."
"My power? Why do you need my power? You have great power if you can
escape from the Abyss," Then with a grin she adds,"If you want me power, you
will have to pass my trial."
"Very well I will take your trial." Then following her into the hill side, I sent forth on my trial.


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  • User Comments: [3]
    Areishia_01
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    Wed Dec 05, 2007 @ 08:10pm


    Pretty good but I think you saied ,,tree" a bit too much in too short time...but the story is cool, I just remembered that Raziel sort of is an angel that has a book that contains information that no other angel knows, he gave it to Adam once, the other angels didn't like it and trow the book in the ocean but God took it out and gave it back to Adam, He didn't punish Raziel and he's sort of still writting(I don't realy know for sure) what God says, He's also a caracter in a manga about angels(they're all more or less mentally ill or something)it was a cool story biggrin , he's still in the academy in that story and dosen't have the book, he dosen't really know that much either...so yeah the story in the manga is a lot difrent but it's cool no matter what biggrin


    Keita01
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    Wed Feb 13, 2008 @ 04:18pm


    very very exiting. ^_^


    Konkuro-kun
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    Thu Oct 30, 2008 @ 05:48pm


    *still awaiting anxiously*


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