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Depressing Poetry
Please comment I would really appreciate it. I want to be a poet someday.
Surrounded by friends,
Yet I still feel lonely.
They can not help me,
I’m all alone.
Will this feeling of hatred,
Ever go away?
This feeling of emptiness,
Surrounds me,
Consumes me,
And I fall into the darkness.
Into the depths of nowhere.
Here I am,
There he is.
Is this the end?
He leaves me,
I’m alone again.
But now he is gone.
I cannot cry because the pain is too great.
I throw up, feeling more emptiness.
Did he ever have a heart?
Cannot escape my own thoughts.
The voice pours out.
And I obey its every command.
Confused about what to do,
I fall to the ground.
I wake up,
Head pounding.
Bright lights,
Did I achieve?
A figure in white approaches me.
“There is someone here to see you.”
There she is,
I’m in white,
She is not.
I sit up,
Look around.
Not heaven,
Hospital.
Back to the beginning.
Is he still mine?
She is crying.
I comfort her.
She tells me.
I feel myself fall back
…He’s gone…



~*~ LoVe ~*~

It takes only one minute to get a crush on someone,
an hour to like someone and a day to love someone,
but it takes a life time to forget someone.

Im not supposed to love you.....
Im not supposed to care.....
Im not supposed to wonder where you are.... and what you do....
Im sorry i cant help it....i already fell in love with you

I still remember the day you where holding my hand....
you say ur gonna walk to the end of the world with me....
But Then... You leave me...
From the day you went away... i forgot how to breathe....
how to cry...
from that day.. im afraid of looking up to the sky...
from now on only im waiting....
things are getting blury.... i forgot what im waiting for...
LoVe?..... Is there really have True LoVe?
Where can i find the answer.... or maybe there is no answer...



Confussledlover
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    colts dude
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    commentCommented on: Sun Feb 17, 2008 @ 05:45am
    damn britt thats deep srry dakota broke up with u hes not good enough 4 u anyway im always here 4 u


    commentCommented on: Mon Feb 18, 2008 @ 06:46am
    oh ya and ur a gr8 poet ur good at it mrgreen ur asome xp



    colts dude
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    waterbending master24
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    commentCommented on: Mon Feb 25, 2008 @ 02:07am
    brittany,
    as always i am amazed with your writing ability.
    the content makes me think and wonder how mush of that pain on the paper is from me, and how much of it could have been avoided.
    but i believe that you are strong enough to survive anything even having your heart broken as many times as you have. no shud have to suffer that much.

    just remember that i am here and that i will try my best to help you through anything that you need me to.

    Nick


    commentCommented on: Mon Mar 03, 2008 @ 10:51pm
    wow its beautiful and Again I love you Britt and So does someone else I know (nick) and we are here for you if you need anything.
    -jesse heart



    narutorox411
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    dying_inside6
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    commentCommented on: Fri Mar 14, 2008 @ 02:31am
    crying gonk crying


    commentCommented on: Sun Jul 06, 2008 @ 07:29am
    Wow...i swear with all your poems, you can literally feel the sadness that comes off of em, now idk if thats a good thing, but i like it. Its so that way you can be the mood of the poem. Good job biggrin biggrin

    But as everyone else says, Im here for you if you need me to help, you know ill always be here, you can count on it biggrin biggrin



    Methendar
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