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Sometimes when i say "im fine" i want someone to look me in the eyes & say "tell me the truth"
WERE STUCK IN THIS PLACE SO DARK

press, push, imatate, and don't reapet.
is all i have to say too you.
so good bye leave right now
i cant take this feeling anymore.
if you stick around your gonna end up dead tonight.


were stuck in this place so dark.
how many candels will i have to light till i can see if your gone?
even when i open my eye's its still dark in here.
and this box can hold anything.
in this place so dark and distant.
so how many times should i scream till i realize that your gone.

but tell me i still can be your angel of death.
tell me i still cane be your angel of darkness.
am i still dead to you?
or did you just realize that im breathing?
and how long will you scream at me for something she did?

were stuck in this place so dark.
how many candels will i have to light till i can see if your gone?
even when i open my eye's its still dark in here.
and this box can hold anything.
in this place so dark and distant.
so how many times should i scream till i realize that your gone.


so please just stop showing your face tonight.
i need my room to breathe.
i need my room to live life without you here.
i need my space and thats why i got up and left.
i'm halfway to the end of this life by now.
and your just pushing me off the edge.


were stuck in this place so dark.
how many candels will i have to light till i can see if your gone?
even when i open my eye's its still dark in here.
and this box can hold anything.
in this place so dark and distant.
so how many times should i scream till i realize that your gone.

i've been in this place too many times before.
i've seen the same dark faces.
it's now just too much for you too handel.
so just let go of this.
but please remember all the time we had togther


were stuck in this place so dark.
how many candels will i have to light till i can see if your gone?
even when i open my eye's its still dark in here.
and this box can hold anything.
in this place so dark and distant.
so how many times should i scream till i realize that your gone.


i've tried to hold on.
i held your hand when you were scared.
i whipped away your tears when you were sad.
i tried to hold on but it just dont work.
it was never ment to be.
so just stop hidding this and let go.






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Yokoda
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commentCommented on: Sat Jul 30, 2005 @ 07:25pm
I like it^^


commentCommented on: Sat Jul 30, 2005 @ 07:37pm
Awesome Awesome



thingsXlongXforgotten
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miztizang_zeriouz
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commentCommented on: Sat Jul 30, 2005 @ 07:38pm
I like it 3nodding maybe u can name it *were stuck in this place so dark* because u repeat that lots of times...it's just a suggestion.


commentCommented on: Sun Jul 31, 2005 @ 11:48pm
it makes me wonder of you you wrote this poem to it seems like it was for one person inparticular who you wanted to say something to but couldn't so you wrote it down in code (or poem) i like it is a wonderful way of expresses and it goes very deep in you



enchantressofthedarkside
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Mr.shovels
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commentCommented on: Wed Aug 10, 2005 @ 12:33am
surprised
Thats awesome.


commentCommented on: Fri Aug 12, 2005 @ 09:11pm
wow i like it



kitty kitty muffin
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