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Sammy
well yeah pretty much my diary and s**t i want to write about so whatever
I pulled on my warm, fluffy coat that lay on the wooden chair, pushed opedn the frozen door and stepped out into the knee-high icicles of snow, where the cold air struck me like a slap in the face. As i trudged through the deep, hard snow, the crisp breeze felt like a thousand ice-covered knives piercing my body. I shivered as i continued my trek to my destination. The air prickled my ears and cheeks, like flames waiting to engulf my head. My pants froze around my ankles, making it harder and harder to walk. The only thing i could see was the paper white snow around me. Covering the trees, the ground, making the houses around me look like snow covered hills. The thick, fresh air kept coming at me in waves, making it harder and harder to breath. I pried my frozen lips open and licked them, trying to warm them. Shoving my way past all my obsticles, i made it to his house. Pushing his door open, i clambered in a slammed the door behind me, instantly blocking to cold and welcoming the warmth. The air greeted me with a warm embrace, melting the snow off my pants and the cold in my heart.

Wrote this for Creative Writing...thought you might like it.






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XxSkeleton_BridexX
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commentCommented on: Mon Jun 16, 2008 @ 11:23pm
this is such a great short story. ill give u a A+ on it!!!!!!!!


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