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Depressing Poetry
Please comment I would really appreciate it. I want to be a poet someday.
Take me,
Take me slowly.
Death awaits me and I feel overjoyed.
Slowly I wish to die,
For I want to say goodbye.
I deserve this slow death,
It was nothing compared to life.
As I say goodbye,
I know I can stop ending my life.
I am the one who smokes the cigarette,
I am the one who swallows the pills,
I am the one who gets little sleep,
I am the one that cuts open her own skin.
I know you will miss me,
At the moment I dont care.
How much do I matter,
You wished me dead?
This feeling so overwhelming,
My tears start to fall.
Never again will I see you,
Because I know you will not fall.
My friends will visit me in heaven,
While you will not,
On earth will you stay,
Your corpse I hope will rot.





Confussledlover
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    waterbending master24
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    commentCommented on: Tue Jul 22, 2008 @ 12:46am
    this one is good but it is very sad.
    who was this written for?


    commentCommented on: Tue Jul 22, 2008 @ 04:40am
    Who do you think?
    Dakota



    Confussledlover
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    Methendar
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    commentCommented on: Tue Jul 22, 2008 @ 04:56am
    Yeah, its kinda obvious who this is written for lol, any ways VERY GOOD!!! Keep it up!!


    commentCommented on: Tue Jul 22, 2008 @ 04:57am
    cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry


    burning_eyes burning_eyes burning_eyes burning_eyes burning_eyes burning_eyes burning_eyes



    xFlaming Sorrowx
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    dying_inside6
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    commentCommented on: Tue Jul 22, 2008 @ 04:00pm
    just asking


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